Pantoum

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A view of Pillaiyarpatti Temple

Fire and ice

In the same room

Rarely coexist

Strength or mass will Prevail

 

In the same rooom

Puddles or ashes

Strength or mass will prevail

Creating a wasteland of sludge

 

Puddles or ashes

But when we’re apart

It’s a wasteland of sludge

…Togather, a perfect puzzle

 

But when we’re part

….We should never part

Togather a perfect puzzle

Confusinngly blissful

Pantoum

We should never part

So much to do and say

Confusingly blissful

A quiet soft rain

 

The time is too short

A perfect fit

An electrical storm

It seems impossible

 

A perfect fit

When we share the same room

It seems impossible

Fire and ice

When I surfed the net I came across the above. It's a malyasian form of poetry. It is called Pantoum. The second sentence of rhe first stanza gets repeated and so on.

 

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